Room video feedback

Andrea's canvas room films, plus the original version 4 they were modelled on. For each film, play it, then go through it beat by beat: tap Working or Not working on each beat and say why in the box. Pause anywhere and use Mark this moment for something at an exact point. Then give the film an overall Keep, Change or Drop.

Everything is saved on this device as you go, so you can stop and come back. Send whenever you like; you can send again later and the newest answers are the ones that count.

Anything else?